I think it looks cool but I like the cropped one more.The Beatles in the front dont really work for me. The Undead look nice even without reference I think but you could probably reduce the amount of folds in the cloth a tad. I personally also would have tried to break the grey cloth with some golden ornamentation and some layered different colored cloth. Also some jewellery maybe to show that they are Higher ranking ones or something. At the Moment they look too much like Christian Monks maybe unless that is what you were going for and fits your setting.
Anyway it looks cool to me :)